A couple of years ago I was posting stories on Spaces. Some of them I still love, others I think a fairly average. I quite like this one, I love the idea behind it, although I'm not too keen on the way I wrote it. Let me know if you love it or hate it.
The following was written under the name 'Mysterious Jones' and was originally posted to spaces, it has not been edited:
Straight to the Story:
She held closed...